John, looks solid. I as well think a little more sugar might help get the undercrust look. Also, it occurred to me looking at their slices that there is some paste in their sauce, maybe half and half with crushed tomatoes or something, that may explain a stronger more acidic flavor. Either way looks great already. Personally, I would stick to whole milk, I do not love dragone, if you can find saputo or sorrento it would likely be better. Just my opinion on that though. -marc