It really depends on the taste, All pizza pictures look good, and your picture looks good.
But the taste is what's important. How did you like the taste of your pizza?
Is it the crust light and airy? or is it more dense and hardy?
The best way is just to test it out and see what people think.
Friends, Family, a guy in the street.
Hard to tell if it's comercial or not because so many people have so many different tastes.
If it's good, it's good.